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Re: ST Article



At 03:42 PM 11/18/1999 -0500, Bill Flowers wrote:
 >> say that it can scarcely be faulted. I got the feeling that he just 
felt it
 >> was too much a copy versus something that revolutionary in the sport 
tourer
 >> category.
 >
 >Evolution of a concept, not revolution.

change above to "versus (adding) something (new)(ie styling / functionality 
of a part etc) that (was) revolutionary"

Right word - poor sentence. Maybe I need to proof a little more....

- - Eric


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